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Mama
Wrote it as my main gift to my mama for her birthday. A simple poem that doesn't rhyme but let's her know how much I adore her. |
| by Evie Huber | | posted on | 2010-04-28 16:48:00 | | views | 93 : last 2010-09-05 08:08:21 | | comments | 8 : last 2010-08-19 16:15:44 | | category | poetry | | rating | General | |
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From the first moment I opened my eyes, I loved you.
From the first moment I took a breath, you loved me.
I adore my Mama, like a son always does.
I love my Mama, like a daughter always will.
No words can describe how truly you are divine.
The greatest love of all, a mother's love;
as rare as straw spun into gold.
You're the angel voice that guides me along.
To the last time you open your eyes, you'll love me.
To the last time I take a breath, I'll love you.
~Eternally loved by your daughter~
Evie.
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© Evie Huber, 2010, All Rights Reserved.
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| congrats on the marriage. i hope he likes swanson. you know i'm jealous as can be. tell lori to teach you to cook in the new apartment steve built.
you're the sweetest person i've ever known. |
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| This is heartfelt and very beautifully expressed, Evie. It is wonderful to have such a relationship with your mom and your verses are a tribute and a gift for her. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| evie, please write something new so i can slam it. this one is too sweet. |
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| evie angel,
i tried some red rasberry this week and it was marvy. |
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| Evie, This is beautiful! Sorry that it has taken me so long to appreciate and even read it! It makes me want to write something as beautiful for my mom! Thank-you for posting it here!~LOVE Brad P.S. CONGRATULATIONS on your marriage! |
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| so why don't you tell us something about the wedding and honeymoon? enquiring minds want to know... |
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| Haha, Steve. Figures you'd be commenting about my marriage first; then the actual poem. I really appreciate you taking the time to leave me a comment, its been a little while since I've been on the site. And Steve... just so you know, I think very highly of you too. *hugs* |
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| OMG, thank you Regis! I remember when writing this poem for her and printing it out with a frame... I cried during it all. It was very hard for me to actually write this poem for her. There is so much to be said and expressed that I knew I had to make it more of a short poem... or else it'd be a book... haha. I'm glad this piece is able to touch you all, hopefully my relationship with my mama, was a blessing everyone got a chance to experience with their own mothers. Thank you again Regis. |
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