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The Seahorses Are Decieived
From the "Adventurs of the Human Cardinal. |
| by Terry McDermott | | posted on | 2008-12-18 22:09:53 | | views | 235 : last 2010-09-05 08:30:50 | | comments | 3 : last 2009-04-24 20:43:14 | | category | fiction | | rating | General | |
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From the "Adventures of the Human Cardinal
The Seahorses Are Deceived (Flash Fiction)
In our last episode (two months ago) Kelly Bunn was on the ice planet Cong designing a new disguise. He was now the Midnight Seahorse, and was heading to Seahorse City. His ex-wife Queen Rat Lady and her boyfriend ,that tie-dyed hippie wrestler, Kent Cool did not realize that Kelly Bunn was no longer that seven- foot pink rabbit know as Killer Bunny. It was the same for the Human Cardinal, Benny the Bat, Blue Tornado Boy, Icy the Bat, Officer Mick Maroon, and Space Patrolmen Major Matt Matthew. All were present at Seahorse City.
The Midnight Seahorse left the ice planet Cong on a public shuttle ship. His fist test upon entering Seahorse City would be the enchanted seahorses which lived among the clouds. Nobody entered the city without their permission, and with Killer Bunny on the loose, they were being extra careful.
The public shuttle ship stopped above the city, three tiny seahorses came aboard. "Welcome to Seahorse City," one of them said. "But as you know Killer Bunny escaped from the Brooke Meadow Lane jail and we are being extra cautious."
As the three were inspecting the passengers, one of them observed Kelly Bunn in his black shiny disguise. "Hey buddy who are you?"
"I am the Midnight Seahorse," he said, "I am a wrestler and supposed to be fighting tonight at the Aquarium."
"Okay buddy," the seahorse replied, " Hope all you enjoy your stay here in our enchanted city.
The three tiny seahorses left the ship.
The Seahorses Are Deceived (Janaku)
Three
Tiny Seahorses
Made a search
Sadly
The Fell
Into Kelly's Deception
Now
Trouble enters
Enchanted Seahorse City
Stay tuned for more "Adventures of the Human Cardinal."
Janaku is a form of poetry, each verse is three lines based on one, two, three word count, and no line limit. This form was created by Eileen Tobias.
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© Terry McDermott, 2008, All Rights Reserved.
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| LOL, love this tale. Terry you have such a talent with poetry. |
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| Will Kelly Bun's disguise keep the Seahorses at bay? Can't wait to find out! I like your use of different styles of Poetry in telling this tale!~LOVE Brad |
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| killer bunny is my new hero. "decieived" needs to abide by the rule of after sea. |
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